Saturday, December 11, 2010

Out of the Darkness: Moon Graffiti

1 episode.  Approx. 60 minutes. Written by: Dave Stone. Directed by: John Taylor.  Performed by: Colin Baker, Nicola Bryant.


THE PLOT

The Doctor and Peri have gotten the Zeiton-7 needed to fuel the TARDIS. But their problems are not over. The Doctor has discovered that the tinkering he did during his unstable, post-regenerative state actually did a substantial amount of damage to the ship's systems. Every repair he makes now creates a new problem, and the only permanent solution is to track down an elusive particle, left over from the Big Bang.

He tracks this element to Earth in the distant future, a future in which the human race has been driven underground by an invasion by an insectoid race of Pararachnids, intergalactic vandals who destroy worlds before moving on. But not all of the Pararachnids have left - and soon, the Doctor finds himself caught in a struggle for survival between the remnants of the human race and their insect-like oppressors.


CHARACTERS

The Doctor: Now that his regeneration has stabilized, he seems to have developed into a spiky, yet highly protective, avuncular figure to Peri. He takes pains to see to her safety before dealing with the larger problems before him.  Just as he would not talk to Varos' governor about the true value of the Zeiton 7 until Quillam's experiment was halted, so he insists on Peri getting back to the safety of the TARDIS before he deals with the Pararachnids here.

He hasn't fully adapted to the limitations of his new body. His plan for escaping from the Pararachnids using a trick he learned from Houdini fails, because his newest body cannot accomodate some of the physical feats he's used to being able to perform. He remains quick-witted, however, and improvises ably.

Peri: Now that the Sixth Doctor is no longer behaving like a maniac, she is demonstrating an innate trust in him. Veneance on Varos showed her far more at ease with the new Doctor than previous stories, and showed a softer and more companionable relationship between them - well, except for the poor (and almost certainly Saward-penned) TARDIS padding scenes. Their relationship in this story is more or less identical to their relationship in that one, and follows on from it quite well.


THOUGHTS

Moon Graffiti was the main feature of the 2 CD audio short story anthology, Out of the Darkness, first released on disc in 1998, later re-released in the Tales of the TARDIS collection. This story took up the entirety of the first CD, and was the only one of the three tales to feature fully-dramatized scenes acted out by Colin Baker and Nicola Bryant, as well as full sound effects.

As such, this is almost a pre-Companion Chronicle, a halfway house between an audio play and a talking book. Throw in one more actor (for the role of Keno Arne) and this could probably pass muster as a radio play. Colin Baker and Nicola Bryant do the various voices justice. Baker is particularly adept as switching from a neutral narrator's voice to the Doctor's voice and back again, in such a way that one never is confused as to which bits are narration and which bits are dialogue.

Other than a single, misconceived moment in which Bryant delivers one or two of Baker's lines simply because they fall within a paragraph she is reading (the only occurrence of such in the story), the production is quite good, and there are no issues with visualizing the action. Writer Dave Stone clearly understands the vaguely OCD fan tendency to want to be able to precisely slot a story into the chronology. As such, he not only takes care to identify this story as taking place shortly after Vengeance on Varos, but takes care to make the characterization of the Doctor and Peri fit into this position.

The story itself is rather slight, stock stuff. The villains are two-dimensional, giant insect creatures who want nothing more than to destroy and to eat people, with nothing more to them. They are also played strictly for laughs, which is effective when the Doctor is escaping from them, but less effective at the climax. Comedic descriptions of how, presented with a human buffet, the rules of Pararachnid society could "go stuff it," may amuse... but they also obliterate the horror inherent in a scene in which the Pararachnids gorge themselves on semi-frozen humans, and continue to do so once the humans begin to be revived. The climax would have been better-served had Stone dropped the comedy at this point, and instead shifted gears to all-out horror.

Still, while Stone is no Douglas Adams, his attempts to emulate the Adams comedy style amuse more often than not. The climax may be misjudged, but for the most part the comedy actually helps to elevate a stock story, making things much more entertaining than might have been. Benefiting from a good pace, a strong production, and an excellent reading/performance by Baker and Bryant, this is too slight to give a truly strong rating. But it does what it needs to, so gets off with a solid:


Rating: 6/10.

Previous Televised Story: Vengeance on Varos
Next Televised Story: The Mark of the Rani


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Earth & Beyond: The People's Temple

1 episode. Approx. 95 minutes. Written by: Paul Leonard. Directed by: John Taylor.  Performed by: Paul McGann.


THE PLOT

While reading a book about Stonehenge, Sam gets the bright idea to ask the Doctor to take her there, to see it "when it was new, when it was a temple." But she is not prepared for the sight that awaits her. Poor villagers, enslaved by the cruel Bear Man, Coyn, labor night and day to construct the perfect temple. Human sacrifices are performed as ritual by the Deer Man, Shalin.

The Doctor warns Sam against interfering. But faced with such abject misery, the young London girl cannot make herself stand by and watch. The results of her meddling may just spark a war - and the Doctor and Sam will be lucky just to get out of ancient Stonehenge alive!


CHARACTERS

The Doctor: "You look like a man who keeps lists of the people he kills." Paul McGann's laid-back delivery of lines such as this condemnation of the Deer Man, Shalin, oddly helps to emphasize the Doctor's moral judgment. It seems counterintuitive, but his light touch is far more effective than if he spluttered and shouted. It also gives his performance a place to go. The scene with Shalin, in which McGann uses a light touch for the Doctor's lines, is followed about ten minutes later by a similar scene with Coyn. In that scene, McGann does go for harsher, sterner tones, which differentiates it from the earlier encounter and keeps the performance varied.

Sam Jones: Unsurprisingly, by far the longest of the Earth & Beyond stories also offers by far the best characterization for Sam. Writer Paul Leonard neatly parallels her relationship with the Doctor to the childhood relationship between Shalin and Coyn, with her loving the Doctor's ability to take her suggestions and go a bit further with them. Sam is impulsive, which is what puts both her and the Doctor in their situation in this story to start with. But she also can think quite quickly, drawing on what she knows of people from this time period to bluff the superstitious natives. When the Doctor is held by Coyn and Shalin, Sam is thrust into a leadership role with Dorlan, a prisoner she helped to free. Sam feels guilt when her plan to help Dorlan's people goes badly wrong, and even when the Doctor points out that she isn't responsible for the actions of others, she insists on claiming responsibility.


THOUGHTS

Many of the reviews of The People's Temple from the time of this story collection's release complained about it: too long, too slow, no science fiction elements. I will say that people who found the Hartnell historicals dull probably will find this story dull as well. But I was always a big fan of the Hartnell historicals, and that may explain why I enjoyed this story so much.  The People's Temple may originally have been published within a short story collection, but it's more of a novella - and the added time allows writer Paul Leonard to present characters, a society, and a situation with some actual depth and texture.

Coyn and Shalin are particularly strong characters, complex individuals whose lifelong friendship, and growing wariness of each other, drives the story. An excellent prologue presents them as children, and Leonard's polished and careful writing (a notable step up from the prose of the previous two short stories) details that friendship as a series of negotiations: Coyn makes Shalin feels useful, Shalin makes Coyn feel brave. "That is one reason why they are friends." An epilogue brings the story full circle in a way that's highly satisfying, aided by the simple but effective sound effects used in this production.

This is definitely a story aimed at adult readers/listeners, and would probably be barely recognizable to fans familiar only with the new series. The pace is slow and measured, the violence genuinely brutal, and the tone often bleak. It presents two memorable guest characters, each a seriously flawed individual responsible for many deaths, and yet doesn't ultimately treat either of them as simply a villain. Most reminiscent of the early Hartnell historicals, it's a story I'd most recommend in its audio form (thanks to the production values and McGann's excellent reading) and one probably best enjoyed by those who appreciated the early Hartnell historicals.


Rating: 8/10.

Preceded by: Earth & Beyond: Dead Time

Previous Televised Story: The TV Movie

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Earth & Beyond: Dead Time

1 episode.  Approx. 35 minutes.  Written by: Andrew Miller. Directed by: John Taylor.  Performed by: Paul McGann.


THE PLOT

Trapped within a dead, forgotten derelict, totally paralyzed and helpless, the Doctor finds himself besieged by ghostly voices invading his mind. He will have to use all his mental powers to defend himself, before these beings known only as "The Forgotten" not only kill him, but wipe his very existence out of history!


CHARACTERS

The Doctor: The story confirms that this is still comparatively soon after the regeneration into his 8th persona. We also are told that a tiny part of the Doctor's brain dies every time he regenerates, healing over but remaining essentially dead tissue. Once he figures out the true nature of "The Forgotten," his fear of them is replaced by scorn, as he regards them as incompetent bunglers and murderers.

Sam Jones: Has a strong sarcastic streak in this story - maybe too strong, as she has a sarcastic response to almost everything the Doctor says to her, though at least it's played off as a reaction to their spooky surroundings. Her crush on the Doctor is still strong, as evidenced by her blushing when he ties his cravat around her to keep them together in the darkness, and she is nervous about showing her fears within this darkened derelict, lest she come across as a frightened child.


THOUGHTS

This is a well-crafted short story that is given an extra boost by an excellent audio production. The production is approached very much like a ghost story, with the voices of "The Forgotten" rendered in ghoulish whispers that shift from one side of the audio frame to the other, echoing to chilly effect. Sound effects and music enhance the atmosphere, while Paul McGann's voice lends itself quite well to the gothic mood. McGann seems to particularly relish voicing "The Forgotten," who whisper lines about how they "are going to kill you, Doctor... so slowly."

The story itself is a good one, with writer Andrew Miller using a flashback structure to good effect. The story begins with the Doctor already trapped, fighting against the mad voices who seem not to threaten his death so much as promise it. From that point, the story moves back and forth between the Doctor's struggle against "The Forgotten," and the events that led to him becoming trapped. When the flashback has fully caught up with the story's opening, then the narrative moves on to a solution - one which could seem like a continuity overload, but which manages to work within the context of the story.

As with other short stories, there really isn't much to add. It's a tidy little piece, very well-produced and well-read by McGann. If you can get hold of it at a good price, either in the original cassette release Earth & Beyond or in the Tales of the TARDIS collection, this one is recommended.


Rating: 7/10.

Preceded by: Earth & Beyond: Bounty
Followed by: Earth & Beyond: The People's Temple


Previous Televised Story: The TV Movie

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Earth & Beyond: Bounty

1 episode, approx. 35 minutes.  Written by: Peter Anghelides.  Directed by: John Taylor.  Performed by: Paul McGann.


THE PLOT

The Doctor has promised Sam Jones, a young London girl, one trip in the TARDIS - and then straight back home, much to her disappointment. She is angling to extend her time with him during their easy, relaxing visit to a beach. But that vacation is cut short when the Doctor and Sam discover alien debris in the sand. Abruptly, the piece of debris is knocked away by a shape-shifting alien, who runs off with it - and with the Doctor's TARDIS key!


CHARACTERS

The Doctor: This story has a splendid chase sequence, in which the Doctor uses his mind to catch up with the alien he's pursuing. The alien has much faster transportation, while the Doctor is on foot for this leg of the chase. But the Doctor observes the winding road, and uses it to keep the chase viable.

Sam Jones: Given the limited time available, writer Peter Anghelides does a good job of making Sam likable and plucky. Her interplay with the Doctor over a game of "I've never done..." is quite amusing, and Anghelides gives a nice turn of mood when Sam challenges the Doctor to deny that he's ever killed anyone, and then is disconcerted by the Doctor's non-reply. She enjoys being with the Doctor and clearly has a fairly strong teen crush on him (one wonders if she'd have been half as fast to go off with the First or Sixth Doctors), but she isn't quite sure of him at this point - something used to good effect when the Doctor feigns callousness for the aliens' benefit.

THOUGHTS

Another short story which, like Benny's Story, is fairly thin on a storytelling level. This is actually an even more generic story, as the meat of the tale amounts to a big chase scene.

But it may well be that very thing that makes this story work within its brief running time.  When you only have about a half hour to work with, a simple story is usually best. Because the story itself is so uncomplicated, there is plenty of time for some charming character interplay. Anghelides is a good writer, one who understands setting up a moment to pay it off later. As a result, Sam's offhand challenge to the Doctor of "I've never killed anyone," ends up having multiple payoffs by the story's end.

This isn't a fantastically ambitious Doctor Who story. But it's a well-judged short piece, very entertaining with some decent character bits. Well worth a listen.


Rating: 6/10.

Followed by: Earth & Beyond: Dead Time

Previous Televised Story: The TV Movie

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Short Trips: Degrees of Truth

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Short Trips: Stop the Pigeon

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Short Trips: Old Flames


1 episode. Approx. 34 minutes. Written by: Paul Magrs. Performed by: Nicholas Courtney.


THE PLOT

In 18th century England, the Doctor is saved from drowning by the aging Rector Adams. He recuperates but, as he prepares to return to the TARDIS, he sees something so out of place he can't ignore it: a double-decker bus in the woods.

The bus is actually a TARDIS belonging to Iris Wildthyme, a particularly irresponsible Time Lady. Iris is here with a traveling companion of her own, the young Captain Turner. She has designs on the estate of the reclusive Lady Huntingdon, planning to arrange for Turner to marry Huntingdon's granddaughter, Bella.

But Lady Huntingdon has a secret plan of her own, with designs on a property far more valuable than any mansion: Iris Wildthyme's TARDIS!


CHARACTERS

The Doctor:
 In his fourth incarnation, at least, he rather enjoys Iris' company, reflecting that things are never dull when she is around. In the tradition of Doctors regarding their other incarnations with scorn, he condemns his Third persona as arrogant and far too certain of himself - a strong accusation, given that the Fourth Doctor isn't exactly humble. He is highly observant, and at the crisis point he remembers an important item in Iris' TARDIS that he uses to resolve the situation.

Sarah Jane Smith: Acts more as an observer than a participant in this story. She does act as a buffer between the Doctor and others, apologizing to Rector Adams for his rudeness and observing that he "isn't used to being rescued," as opposed to being the one rescuing others. She also recognizes almost immediately that Turner is out of his proper time, picking up on conversational quirks that belong more to a man of the 20th century than one of the 18th.

Iris Wildthyme: This short story was the first Doctor Who tale featuring Iris. It isn't precisely Iris' debut, however, writer Paul Magrs having used a variation of the character in his otherwise unrelated Phoenix Court novels. This likely explains why she seems so already fully formed as a presence here. Really, this is Iris' story. She is the one with a goal for Lady Huntingdon's estate, and she is the one who attracts Huntingdon's attention. The Doctor spends most of the story observing, only really stepping in at the end to resolve the situation. In a full-length work, this would be a serious weakness - but Iris is an entertainingly offbeat presence, and Magrs doesn't allow her to overshadow the Doctor, filtering her appearances through his viewpoint.


THOUGHTS

Old Flames is a fun little story, a breezy blend of classic Doctor Who elements and Jane Austen trappings. The actual narrative is fairly thin, largely because Magrs doesn't seem that concerned with the story. In a 34 minute story, almost 15 minutes pass before Iris' designs on Lady Huntingdon's estate are made clear. Another 10 have gone by before Huntingdon's agenda is revealed. Magrs seems to be more interested in observing these quirky characters within this setting, letting them interact and banter at length.

It will be up to the listener to decide whether this is a good thing or a bad. I enjoyed the characters and their interactions. The Doctor talking over and around Lady Huntingdon when she decides to ignore him is a funny scene, one that's easy to picture Tom Baker playing, and the Doctor/Iris conversations have just the right mix of amusement and nostalgia. All the characters seem to have a bit of extra life in them, and the dialogue is consistently amusing (the final line is golden).

The audio was originally presented on cassette in the BBC's Short Trips collection, which gathered short stories primarily from BBC Books' first Short Trips publication. It was reissued in the first volume of the BBC's Tales from the TARDIS. It's a very basic audio production - a straight dramatic reading by Nicholas Courtney, with only a few music cues and sound effects.

Courtney's reading is terrific, though. He adds extra enunciation to the Doctor's lines, elongating certain vowel sounds in a way that makes it that little bit easier to picture Tom Baker saying them. His cultured voice is perfectly-suited to the upper class setting, and he has a wryly humorous undercurrent to his delivery that is a fine match to the story.

Overall, this is an engaging reading of a story I quite enjoyed. Recommended.


Overall Rating: 7/10.

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